Self-Published. Need I Say More?

No, but, I'm going to. I've never written a book, so kudos to old Phil for having the gumption to do this. But dude, proofread. How about basic spellcheck? How about a friend who's a reader? There's an error in the first sentence; there's an error on the back-cover blurb, and it just keeps plugging along that way. Mistake after mistake after mistake, and just plain cloddy writing. Honestly, I couldn't get past the first few pages. I tried making a game out of it by highlighting the errors, but even that got un-fun after about two pages. Seems like a worthwhile topic, and I appreciate that he cares. But man, stick to lecturing, maybe? Because writing is not your thing. Sorry.